tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2646452764814900070.post6933637989229255113..comments2007-10-04T14:59:16.048+10:00Bechttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04606250162585330166noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2646452764814900070.post-15377301659729322792007-10-04T14:59:00.000+10:002007-10-04T14:59:00.000+10:00Comments and Feedback<BR/><BR/>Theory<BR/><BR/>It was good that you linked the relevant psychological theory to the studies; perhaps, you could have discussed the study implications (from the findings) in somewhat more detail. It might have been useful to outline a theoretical rationale for your ranking of the studies; that is, outlining the key parameters and criteria you used to rank the studies.<BR/><BR/>Research<BR/><BR/>The studies were described in sufficient detail; however, some studies may have been described in too much detail.<BR/><BR/>Written Expression<BR/><BR/>Written expression was very clear and easy to follow. The introduction outlined a clear plan for the blog discussion. The conclusion contained a good summary of the material discussed in the blog. The blog discussion was well structured, with appropriate use of sub-headings. Some referencing errors were present among the in-text references and in the reference list. You appear to have used too many "direct" quotes; use direct quotes sparingly in your psychology written assignments.<BR/><BR/>On-line Engagement<BR/><BR/>You have a number of blog postings, suggesting considerable effort to engage with the unit syllabus. The table outlining your evaluation of the four studies was very good.Alexhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11706159228916029898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2646452764814900070.post-67216226206221433112007-09-02T21:48:00.000+10:002007-09-02T21:48:00.000+10:00Quick comments:<BR/>- Abstract is optional but can help to improve readablity w/out adding to word count<BR/>- Well done with the interlinking.<BR/>- Table - give it an APA style title/caption?<BR/>- This essay topic would lend itself to use of sub-headings<BR/>- Some paragraphs are perhaps overly long.<BR/>- Referencing<BR/>-- italics missing?<BR/>- Appendix?James Neillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01303497574192570961noreply@blogger.com